One comment on “Red Star, White Sun (1)

  1. Good one, Thaddeus. I definitely wonder what happened next. As a reader, I feel the story would be better if you started with the paragraph, “Standing on the platform…” Everything needed for the story unfolds naturally after that. Enjoyed it.

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