2 comments on ““Kelp”

  1. Great hook, good imagery. The change from past to present tense was a little jarring though- perhaps put quotes around the past tense paragraphs, to show how they’re being spoken to the reader?

    • Thank you for the feedback. I will do SOMETHING to correct that issue. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. I know how hard it is to get people to write anything these days.

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